第64話 恋人として過ごす最初の夜への応援コメント
無事つきあえたしあとは子作り計画とか元旦那のところに残ってる娘問題とかか
メンタル大丈夫なのかな新しい母親とか女子大生らしいしまともに母親できるかあやしいけど
第57話 変化した日常への応援コメント
部長はずっと楽しそうだな
あんまりやりすぎるとリサ姉と主人公くっついたあと貸してもらえなくなるぞ
作者からの返信
結構自由にやりたい放題してますね。
今を満喫している感じです。
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第55話 最終日の帰路への応援コメント
He need to build his resolve first and admit he lover Lisa. If he stays like this, it will be half-hearted and not go well.
作者からの返信
A simple harem isn't bad, but half-hearted isn't good either. From now on, his will and resolve will be put to the test.
第54話 2日目の夜への応援コメント
部長的にはテクニック不足は原点要素でもあり育てる楽しみもありみたいなところか
最終的には梨沙とくっつけるけどセフレは続けたいみたいになりそうな
作者からの返信
自分好みに育てるのが趣味みたいなところがある人なのです。
続けたい、とは当然思うでしょうね。狙っていた理想的な男子なので。
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第53話 海辺の街への応援コメント
Ehehe. Just think of the situation they've put themselves in. Especially Risa. She can't exactly show what's on her mind right now. The only one who gets high is Shizuku, who just relaxes.
By the way, how are you doing with the weather, Sensei? We are having 2 very cold weeks. It was -28 degrees today. I would love to be on the beach with our heroes)
作者からの返信
Each of the two women enjoys herself in a different way. Shizuku is having the most fun. Risa is feeling relaxed. But of course, She can't really tell he how she feel.
That's Russia, after all. It looks really cold. It doesn't get that cold here, so I'm always surprised by winter in snowy countries. Speaking of weather these days, there's been a lot of talk about yellow sand blowing in from China. I have rhinitis, so it's quite painful for me.
第52話 1日目の夜への応援コメント
Ehehe. Were they succubi in a previous life? In fact, I think that for an ordinary person, threesome sex is something difficult, both physically and emotionally.
作者からの返信
It's not easy to deal with two female leopards.The female leopards are eyeing him with great interest.
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第51話 雫さんとリサ姉の過去についてへの応援コメント
Ahaha. The beautiful princesses are saved. Don't worry guys, they already have someone to eat.
作者からの返信
It means that unnecessary distractions are not welcome.
第49話 2人の美女と海水浴への応援コメント
Eh, it's a pity that we don't have illustrations, ehehe. It's like dark and light Yin and Yang with Ikki in the middle. Hey, Ikki, pick up your mouth, lol. The goddesses will squeeze everything they can out of you on this trip.
作者からの返信
That's right! There are two women, both light and dark. A woman with tanned skin and a desire to get married. A woman with pure white skin and no desire to get married. Both have their own merits and purposes to be expressed.
第48話 ままならない気持ちへの応援コメント
What a stupid thing to do.. public opinion. Seriously. I'm trying to imagine what would happen if such a couple lived next to me and I knew their circumstances. I wouldn't have any negative thoughts about it at all. Most likely, I would scold my ex-husband for being an idiot. Otherwise, who cares who loves whom, lives with whom, and marries whom? Keep an eye on your own life, but don't meddle in someone else's. What is a society that accepts homosexuality and lesbian relationships, but looks down on couples with a large age difference and divorced people? It's no good at all.
作者からの返信
I think you're right. I agree, which is why I wrote this story. There are people who use various reasons to devalue others. They have no right to do so, but they treat people like villains just because they have certain attributes. There are people who treat them as worthless. This is a story about people who struggle to not give in to such rude people.
第47話 目的の変化への応援コメント
I'm loving it. Finally, Ikki began to think about what he wanted and make the appropriate decisions. Come on, make Risa change her mind and ask you to stay by her side forever.
作者からの返信
His role is to gently accept his stubborn girlfriend. But there are still many challenges ahead. He must contend with the trauma of his failure with his first girlfriend. Is his feeling love, or merely admiration? The time to face it head on is approaching.
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第46話 自分からは言い出し難いへの応援コメント
You kept the lioness waiting too long and she ate you. Ehehe. Next time, she might eat you along with the Rice.
作者からの返信
She's a good hunter for men, so she doesn't like being kept waiting. She's got a delicious meal.
第45話 今までにないリアクションへの応援コメント
I think that Ikki really, deep down, is not ready for such an attitude and would like to have a serious relationship with one woman. Along with his past, what was happening now had completely confused him. What am I doing and why? Where am I going and what is my goal? And you can't consult with anyone..
Not on the topic of our story. I finally got the PS5. And imagine, she came from Japan, lol. The voice of the Japanese girl at startup, demanding that I turn on the joystick, was very sweet.
作者からの返信
The protagonist in this story is the type who worries about his lack of experience with women. However, the heroine is very experienced and has even given birth to a child with him. So a difference in perception stands between them. What should he do? What do he want to do? The path he should aim for is still unclear.
A PS5! You got it at a good time. Apparently, development of the PS6 is delayed due to a semiconductor shortage. This model will remain in use for a while, so I think I'll be able to enjoy it for a long time.
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第46話 自分からは言い出し難いへの応援コメント
３Ｐか
部長はとことんエンジョイする気だな
リサ姉のこと攻めてみるのもいいかなとか画策してそう
作者からの返信
ここから部長のターンが続きます。
そして一輝君にも、少し変化が訪れます。
第45話 今までにないリアクションへの応援コメント
土日の片方は部長と過ごしますとか部長と飲みに行ってついでにお泊まりしますとかなったら嫉妬すごいことになるんだろなあ
作者からの返信
その辺りは次話から色々と動きますので！
第44話 魅惑的な上司への応援コメント
Ahaha. I hope you don't say this to Takamina's face that you want to have sex with her as soon as possible in order to satisfy Risa even more. Lol. To be honest, since I'm sleeping with the boss, we clearly need some erotic pranks at work. It would be a powerful incentive to rampantly devour each other at home, ehehe. Interestingly, Takamine herself seems to be really used to this and seems to be able to teach Ikki a lot.. and it's doubly interesting how Takamine's feelings will change when Ikki grows up enough to take over the reins of government.. I'm pretty sure Takamine likes the lead role now, but what happens when your toy surpasses you and one day the roles change? What will you want then?) After all, Risa was also much more experienced than Ikki at first, but now, she is clearly the one who puts herself in his hands.
作者からの返信
This is just my image, but Director Takamine is similar to the women who were in charge of sex education long ago. She's like a nanny who teaches the protagonist, who is vastly lacking in experience, all sorts of things about women. That's the image I had in mind when I created this character. At the same time, I also think that it would be great for a man to have a boss like that.
第44話 魅惑的な上司への応援コメント
合鍵もってることにもリサ姉はちょっと嫉妬するんだろうなあ
作者からの返信
合鍵はリサ姉と一輝も交換しているので大丈夫です！
ただいざ関係を持たせてみたら、嫉妬心はやっぱり何しても発生しますが。
第43話 その頃理沙はへの応援コメント
After thinking a little about the current situation, I'm starting to think that everything can work out. No matter how strange it may look, this triangle can awaken new feelings and a desire to change something in their relationship between Ikki and Risa, due to the fact that what they kept inside themselves will come out. But this is only on condition that they all absolutely forgive each other and Shizuku does not want a serious relationship with Ikki and easily lets him go.
Speaking of divorced women with children. Of course, there are people in our country who have a negative attitude towards such people. As a rule, this applies to women who lead a marginal lifestyle and take little care of their children and life in general. But if it were a woman like Risa (also with an adult child), hardly anyone would look at her negatively. In general, I would say that marriage itself has been treated more simply lately and there have been more divorces. Many people have come to believe that getting married is not necessary.
Nakajima-san, how did you celebrate the new year? How are the holidays going? I'm fine, I was with my family, cooking and eating delicious food, walking, and watching Harry Potter (ehehe, I like watching it on New Year's Eve). We are currently on vacation (until January 12th). Do you have a weekend like this for the new year?
作者からの返信
Since it's pure fiction, I think it's okay if there are some strange parts. Up until now, I've tried to be a little realistic. But now I think that stories that pursue realism in romance aren't really necessary for web novels. It's an essential element in literary works and love guidebooks, but I don't think it should be done in light novels.
In Japan, divorced women who have given birth to children like Risa are viewed quite negatively. The fact that she has a child with a man she doesn't know is a major negative factor. I've always thought this, but perhaps Japan's dating market is a little different. The number of young people not getting married is increasing, and this is true for young people in Japan as well. What is the reason? Is it because there is no hope for the future within the country? This is the opinion that is commonly expressed.
I'll be making a quick visit to say hello on the 5th, and will be back to work from the 8th. However, I spend most of my time writing novels, so I don't have much time to rest. On busy days, I can write 10,000 characters in a single day. I've also posted this work and another one with a yokai theme. I've been able to spend some time with my family at home, and with my girlfriend.
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第42話 何の為の関係であるのかへの応援コメント
I wonder if it made sense for Risa to get divorced then? There was another woman there too, so what? It was possible to come to the same relationship as now. It's probably some kind of misconception of mine, or I don't understand something, but I can't believe that you can develop and realize your feelings in such a love triangle. It doesn't look real. I'm upset about how things turned out.
I'm sorry, Nakajima-san. For some reason, I really hoped that Risa and Ikki would have a full-fledged relationship, because in fact, they are very close and love each other, they just can't admit it to themselves, looking for some circumstances and excuses. That's how I saw it, and apparently I was wrong..
I'll add a little more. I've read it all over again and thought about it (yes, I take this story very seriously, it got me hooked). I will slightly reconsider my thoughts and expectations from the development of events. Let's just say I was just waiting for some more romantic things and deeds from the characters, but maybe I don't fully feel the depth of their injuries and current condition. I'll try to look at it in a new way. Anyway, I keep waiting for new episodes, because I really like it and it's interesting.
作者からの返信
In Japan today, the concept of a second partner is popular among some people. It's the idea of wealthy people having concubines. There are also influencers who have actually practiced polygamy. Perhaps it was difficult to convey the message because I reflected this domestic situation in my work.
I personally prefer a one-protagonist-one-heroine format. That's how most of the works I've written have been. However, it seems like that makes it hard for a work to gain recognition. I reconsidered whether multiple heroines were necessary, and wrote this work. I prioritized a plot that was convenient for the man. Perhaps that was the distraction.
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第41話 上司と部下への応援コメント
I agree with the answer to the previous comment. Only the manager wins. Not even friendship is in danger, because Risa herself suggested all this. What will happen to the rest is not clear at all. But, I'm somewhat disappointed with Ikki. In order to realize your first love, do you really need to sleep with another woman and arouse the jealousy of the one you like? It seems your ex-girlfriend also liked similar methods, are you really going the same way?
作者からの返信
This behavior is actually very important. It's similar to what his ex-girlfriend did. In fact, the only love he knows is the love he had with her. That's why he chose this path without even realizing it. It's also important that he realizes this later on.
第40話 信じられない提案への応援コメント
Yes, I fully support Ikki's questions and opinions at the end of the chapter. No upset, worry, or possessiveness on Risa's part. Just go to another woman. I would also be sad to realize that this is all you mean to a woman you've loved so much since childhood.
As Nakajima-san correctly pointed out at the beginning of the chapter, there are many types of relationships in this world, and we do not condemn them. But that's what's happening here.. it still hurts the feelings (I think so).
作者からの返信
As we move forward a little further, Risa's feelings and Ikki's changes will emerge. The character Shizuku will help with this. For now, Risa and Ikki continue to take a detour.
第39話 理沙と雫への応援コメント
To be honest, I'm confused. I'm fine with stories with a harem in which everyone is in an equal position and accepts such relationships. Rather, this applies to stories and worlds where the author initially establishes polygamy as the norm.
I'm sorry Sensei, I don't want to upset you, this is just my vision of this episode and the development of events. I don't understand what Risa is doing. Without fully knowing Ikki's feelings, did you decide to share them and decide that it would be better for him? What if an insecure Ikki decides that this means that he's nothing to you and your relationship is so frivolous that you're ready to give him up easily? Who is he to you? A toy that you can share with your friend? No matter what you say as a reason, such a train of thought cannot be ruled out at all.
And what will you do if Ikki says he doesn't want it? And further, if Ikki easily agrees to this, then how will we continue to believe that he loves Risa? Her ex-husband also loved Risa, you know, and also loved sleeping with another woman, which eventually destroyed the marriage. Perhaps we'll accept the truth now that being with two women, you don't really love either of them?
I haven't seen what's next yet, but as my wish, I wish that Ikki would reject this idea for them. He's a kind guy whose faith in love has already been destroyed by a nasty woman. Do not take away from him the last crumbs of feelings that live in his heart towards Risa. I'm afraid that the development of a sex partnership will lead him to the conclusion that love is not necessary at all.
作者からの返信
Telling you everything would take away some of the fun, so I'll answer to the best of my ability.
First of all, this story was not written with the idea of a harem premise. This development was included solely to illustrate the conflict between Risa and her status as a divorced woman.
This development is why I had previously asked about the treatment of divorced women, as values on this issue were likely to differ from country to country.
In Japan, if a woman has been divorced, her market value drops significantly. To the point that people around her may stop her from getting married. However, this is especially true in Japan, and there are probably other countries where it doesn't bother them at all.
Also, if you have children from a previous marriage, they will likely be rejected. These are children born to another man.
Also, if you look at Japanese content, you'll see that there are a lot of teenage heroines. Works with 30-year-old women as heroines are almost never popular except in erotic manga. That's how much the age of 30 is a factor that holds them back.
For these reasons, Risa has such low self-worth that she thinks it would be better to date Shizuku.
第38話 2人の美女とお酒を飲むへの応援コメント
Hm.. perhaps Takamine will push them towards a serious relationship.
作者からの返信
Manager Takamine is portrayed as a very important character. She holds the key to the story.
第37話 2人でショッピングへの応援コメント
Nakazima-sensei, Happy New Year! May the new year be full of inspiration and success! And may everything be happy and peaceful in your personal life and at home!
About our story. It was, in truth, an unexpected plot twist. I can't even imagine where this is going to lead us.
作者からの返信
I look forward to working with you in 2026. I hope it will be a wonderful year for both of us.
Did something happen? There has been a lot of suspicious news since the end of the year, so I was a little worried.
第42話 何の為の関係であるのかへの応援コメント
知らないテク身につけてるのとか知って嫉妬するんだろうな
部長は３Ｐとかも画策しそう
作者からの返信
これから部長に色々と仕込まれていきます。女性についても、性的な事についても。
第41話 上司と部下への応援コメント
親友の恋の後押しと相手の見極めをしながら気持ちよくなれる部長にとってはいいことしかないプランか
作者からの返信
部長はほぼ一人勝ちですね。現時点ではフィーバータイムです。
第40話 信じられない提案への応援コメント
さてこれでリサ姉が嫉妬でやっぱり共有やだってなるか部長が年下絶倫にどハマりするか主人公がヤケクソでヤリチンになってしまうのか
今のお互い踏み込めない関係から進むには一回壊さないとだめなのかな
作者からの返信
初カノで失敗した過去と、バツイチになってしまった現状に、新たな人物の登場でそう変わるのか。
そこを楽しんで頂けたらなと思って、この先の話をご用意しております。
第37話 2人でショッピングへの応援コメント
なるほど、そう来たかーw
今後の展開は色んな可能性が出てきましたね…楽しみですw
作者からの返信
エッチなお姉さんはなんぼ多くても良いですからね。
違うタイプのお姉さん達が、これから色々とやります(笑)
第37話 2人でショッピングへの応援コメント
部長元ギャルか元ヤンなのかな
ギャルと優等生の親友コンビだったってのもなかなかにいいけど
それなら友達のほぼ彼氏なセフレに手はださないか？
作者からの返信
その辺りは次回で分かるようになっています。
親友だった2人の美女が、これからどうなっていくのかが2章のメインです。
第36話 夏と言えばへの応援コメント
I wonder if they'll meet anyone while they're shopping. It's unusual that they've never met anyone they know.)
By the way, how are things in reality? Do people still like going to malls? Lately, I rarely choose to go there, mainly for specific products that I bought online in advance. Now you can buy a lot of things on online markets and pick them up near your home. This is convenient and often more profitable than in a store. For example, from recent purchases, I ordered a PS5 like this. She will be visiting me for 2 weeks from abroad, but this allowed me to save about 12,000 rubles (approximately 24,000 Yen).
作者からの返信
There are a lot of people who go shopping at shopping malls. Perhaps cultural differences are a factor.
For example, in Japan, you basically can't return clothes that have been worn once. It's considered unreasonable to even think about returning them in the first place. For example, if you return a game software that has been opened, you are considered a complainer. Of course, this is an exception if the item is broken.
I've heard that it's not like that overseas, and that returns are quite easy. That may be a big difference. I often don't make important purchases online. I can avoid mistakes like the wrong size or dirty items. I also think that going shopping together is still considered a date. Of course, I do use online shopping, but it's not all in-store. I get the impression that many people use both methods.
第35話 2人の日常への応援コメント
Usually, calm comes before a storm. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next.
作者からの返信
Unlike last time, this time we have two heroines. I hope you will be able to feel the different charms of each one.
第34話 高嶺部長と飲むお酒への応援コメント
I think that if Chief Takamine wanted to, she could easily get him into bed. From her description and interaction, I got the feeling that she is like a lioness who is ready to attack prey at any moment. A colorful character.
There is a question about the salary. As far as I understand 200,000 Yen is not a bad amount of money? Translated into our currency, this is slightly less than 100,000 rubles. Depending on the region, you can live well on your own with this money.
作者からの返信
From the beginning, I had portrayed Manager Takamine as a female leopard-like character, and the impression that she is like a lion is correct. I portrayed her as a second heroine with a different charm from Risa.
In Japan, if you earn more than 200,000 yen a month, you can live alone in a regional city. However, to be precise, the protagonist's monthly income is about 240,000 yen. After various taxes are deducted from that, he is left with around 190,000 to 200,000 yen. In Tokyo, this amount is a bit tight.
第33話 こんな関係も悪くないへの応援コメント
Ugh, I'm glad. That's a good idea, Ikki. We don't need another girl. Let's make this beautiful dark-skinned lady our own.
Nakajima-san, how are things in reality right now? Are there really such original differences in styles, depending on the era in which a person was born and grew up? There is a bad trend among young people in my country right now. Both boys and girls dress in the same dark and baggy clothes of large sizes. Especially high school students and young students. I don't know what caused it, but it looks depressing. Against the background of older young people, they look a little strange, there is no individuality.
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In reality, there are some differences in fashion between generations. It's not a huge change, but Korean-style fashion is popular among teenagers. However, when I was a teenager, gyaru fashion was popular. Loose socks were popular among girls.
When you say "baggy clothes," do you mean rapper and street fashion? When I think of baggy clothes, the first thing that comes to mind is rapper and street fashion.
When you say it gives off a depressing vibe, does that mean that they dress more like punk band members than like rappers?
There are also problems among the younger generation in Japan. A social issue is girls trying to lose weight excessively. They think that being in the 50kg range is overweight. In the worst case scenario, they aim for the 30kg range. To achieve this, they even go so far as to abuse diabetes medication. I'm sure there are various problems depending on the country.
第35話 2人の日常への応援コメント
この成長ぶり
純情そうな新入社員をちょっとつまみ食いしにきた部長を返り討ちにできるか？
作者からの返信
ここから更に色々と起きて行きます。
序盤の転機はもうすぐなので、2～3日お待ちください。
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第34話 高嶺部長と飲むお酒への応援コメント
部長結構遊んでる感じか
リサ姉はヤキモチ焼きそうだなあ
多分表にはそんな出さないんだろうけど
作者からの返信
このタイプの美人上司が実は遊び人だと、結構エッチで良いよねぇという思想から来たキャラです。
これから部長も含めたアレコレを楽しんで頂けたらなと。
第33話 こんな関係も悪くないへの応援コメント
このまま関係続けたら行き遅れたリサ姉の責任とらんとで結婚までいきそうだけど
そうなり前にかっこよく口説いてほしいね
そのためには元カノ襲来みたいなイベントが必要か
作者からの返信
その為の2章ですので、34話以降のアレコレをお楽しみ頂けたらなと。
一輝君の男磨きと恋愛講座が、これから始まりますので。
第33話 こんな関係も悪くないへの応援コメント
わかる、わかるでぇ……そのうち小娘では満足できんようになるんや……経験者やからわかるでぇ……(笑)
作者からの返信
大人の女性との恋愛は、経験しないと良さが分からないんですよねぇ。
第32話 少しずつ前へへの応援コメント
ああ 私は私の元について一輝と同じ質問をしていますが、私は答えが必要かどうかさえわかりません。 一騎当千との関係や現状について、彼女の視点を見てみたいと思うかもしれません。 しかし、私は彼女がただスリルとクールな男を望んでいたと思うので、彼女は蛾のように光に飛んだ。
そして服の選択について。 私はあなたが正しいものを選ぶかどうかは重要ではないと思います。 リサだ あなたは彼女を知っています。 あなたがあまりにもスタイリッシュではないものを選んだとしても、彼女はあなたを侮辱したり、嫌がらせをしたりしません。 彼女のことを考えて、心の底から選ぶことが彼女にとって重要だと思います。 この特定の状況では、注意はおそらく物事自体よりも重要です。
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The protagonist's ex-girlfriend was the type who wanted her partner to understand everything about her. Even though she said she was scared of sex, deep down she wanted him to be forceful. However, the protagonist continued to keep her word. She was always the type who wanted her partner to understand everything about her.
As the protagonist, he wants to choose clothes that suit Risa as best as possible. But he doesn't want to choose clothes that will diminish Risa's value because of his choice. But when she asks him to choose clothes, he doesn't want to refuse. That's the conflict he faces. But for Risa, it's enough that he chooses.
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第32話 少しずつ前へへの応援コメント
リサ姉も恋人ムーブしたいの抑えられなくなってるなー
元カノは親子レベルで歳離れた相手が大人だから経験豊富で素敵とか思ってすぐ股開いたのか主人公にも怖いから嫌といいながら強引にせまってほしかったのか
作者からの返信
彩智は面倒臭い察してタイプなので、素直に聞き入れた一輝のせいにしていた感じですね。
怖いとは口で言いつつも、強引に押して欲しいみたいな感じです。基本的に全て察してムーブしかしません。
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第31話 少しだけ変わったリサ姉の反応への応援コメント
Maybe Lisa stopped joking around and started accepting Ikki's feelings and thoughts because she wanted to make this relationship serious?
It seems that Ikki was very traumatized by his mother. It doesn't seem like she was a good mother or a woman in general. They say that children should and will always love their mother. But I think there are mothers who cannot be loved and respected.
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Risa still thinks that dating him is wrong. She thinks that she should marry an unmarried woman around her age. But she can't help but depend on him. He told her that they would get married if they had a child.
His mother was never a good mother. She needed a father, not a child. She was the polar opposite of Lisa, which could have traumatized the protagonist.
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第31話 少しだけ変わったリサ姉の反応への応援コメント
前回の結婚発言でさらに沼に沈んでしまったか
子供できて結婚してる未来言葉にされたら想像しちゃったんだろうなあ
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不味いと分かっていながらも、どうしても甘えてしまっているのが現状ですね
第30話 俺は貴女の努力を見て来たへの応援コメント
Yes, as I said, there are difficult choices ahead. Very difficult. That's what happens when you don't think about the consequences.
Ikki sank into despondency. I don't fully understand him, but it seems that it's not worth continuing to be sexual partners with Lisa. You need to think about the future, because now it is unclear where this path leads you.
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The protagonist's pain is hard to describe in words. He tried his best to fulfill his ex-girlfriend's wishes, only to be betrayed and repaid with the worst possible thing. He doesn't show it, but he is sad. But more than that, he just prioritizes Risa. This is where his true test begins.
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第30話 俺は貴女の努力を見て来たへの応援コメント
主人公にはガード固かったのに40代のおっさんにあっさり騙されたうえに不倫て
別れてから三ヶ月で妊娠気付くくらいだから別れてすぐ肉体関係もったのか
新入社員が上司にくわれたか内定後に人事から口説かれたみたいなパターンかな？
相手から慰謝料とか堕胎費用は取れるだろうけど既婚者って知ってたなら奥さんから慰謝料取られるなあ
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あんまり胸糞な話を詳しく書くのもどうかと思ったので、明記はしませんでしたが就活の時点で目を付けられた→その後もちょくちょく接触があり絆される→良い様に手玉に取られて喰われる→惚れて一輝と分かれる。という流れです。
既婚者とは知らなかったパターンなので、元カノはギリセーフ、既婚者のクズが破滅で終了です。
そこまで本編で書くつもりはないです。
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第29話 思わぬ再会への応援コメント
Ahahaha. That's the twist. Oh my God, Ikki, which snake have you met? A terrible woman. Lisa is a smart girl, she saw through your ex just like Sherlock Holmes. I'm pretty sure that life with such an unscrupulous and stupid woman will be just hell and will end in divorce and alimony, plus, she will cheat all the time. Well, now she faces a difficult choice. Become a single mother, or take the risk and have an abortion.
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She wasn't just a simple ex-girlfriend who appeared for the sake of the story; she was the worst kind of person, destroying the protagonist's view of love and even Paternity fraud.
At the same time, she also exists to further show Risa's charm as a woman. She also has a moment to shine as a woman who has been betrayed by her awful partner.
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第29話 思わぬ再会への応援コメント
主人公には何年も付き合って何もさせなかった割にヤリ逃げするようなのにはあっさり股開いて碌に避妊もしてなかったのか
男見る目もなかったんだなこの地雷
チャラ男に適当にお姫様扱いされてコロッといったか会社のヤリチン上司とかを大人で頼れると勘違いしたか優良物件捨ててアホだなあ
元カノの反応からしてリサ姉が主人公の初恋相手みたいのは察してたのかな
リサ姉は結婚したいくらい好きなのに収入安定するころだと子供作れるか分からないから二の足踏んでるのに托卵してくるとか内心ブチギレてるんだろうな
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彩智に関しては、正直二股も追加するか悩みました。
あまりにカス過ぎるのと、盛り過ぎかなと思ってこのラインに収めました。
現実に居そうな地雷彼女をイメージして書いたのが彩智でした。
一輝君の恋愛観が崩れてしまうには、十分に嫌な女性にしたつもりです。
彩智が一輝の初恋に気付いていた、というのは合っています。だからこそ、対抗しようとしていました。
リサ姉は内心だけで言えば、かなり怒ってはいます。でも大人なので、ブチギレして怒鳴るような真似はしません。
第28話 あの頃の2人への応援コメント
So many years of mutual respect, care and warmth. How can you not fall in love here.. Get those feelings back, Ikki. You can create that warmth again and not let it go. It's possible now.
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What he lacks is confidence and experience in love. If he had been in a relationship with a good partner from the beginning, he might have taken a different approach. However, his first partner was a bad choice.
第28話 あの頃の2人への応援コメント
両思いだしなにかきっかけあればつきあえそうだけど
恋敵がくるか元旦那とか元カノあたりがやらかしにくればなにか変わるかな
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気持ち的には付き合えばって感じなのですが、もうちょっと色々あります。
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第27話 連休明けの仕事への応援コメント
Ahaha. I don't think Takamine was joking. She looks like a lady who can charm the man she needs. I wonder if she's already interested in Ikki, or are they still at the level of colleagues only? Now for me, Ikki looks like my favorite type of main characters from NTR and BSS novels, in which a girl leaves the main character, who is essentially a great guy, but is too simple in a relationship and does not give thrills. Older girls who don't really need thrills anymore will be happy to pick up such a guy. And the ex will regret it later. Lol. I wonder if we'll see the regrets of an ex-girlfriend here?
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第27話 連休明けの仕事への応援コメント
部長堅物かと思ったら意外と男性経験豊富？
今のところ主人公年上キラーのかんじだけど頼りにもなるし純朴でもあるから甘えたいタイプと甘えさせたいタイプどっちにも刺さりそうだから年上年下どっちにもモテるか
地雷元カノみたいに甘やかすとどんどんつけあがるタイプだとドンドンダメにするから合わないだけか
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もう少し話が進むと、2章になって部長との絡みが増えます。真実はそちらで。
主人公のイメージは大体その認識で合っていますよ。作中でどこまで書くかは迷っていますが、学生時代にちゃんとモテていました。
ただ自覚が全く出来ていないだけで。
第26話 抜け出せない沼への応援コメント
This is absolutely not true. At the same age of 33, you can still safely have a baby. And even at 35. The risks are slightly higher, but far from critical. With the current level of medical technology and pregnancy management, this is a reality. I think Lisa has already reached the stage where she needs to make a firm decision. You just won't be able to give it up later. Therefore, it's better to honestly tell me now what's in your heart. You don't have to decide for Ikki what's best for him. Tell him everything and let him decide for himself.
第25話 2人で過ごす日々への応援コメント
I think it perfectly shows our feelings and attitudes to each other. If you're both pleased that you're considered spouses, I think it's obvious what that means) Ikki is great for being honest with Lisa about how much he likes it.
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If the two of you had met as your destined partner from the beginning, then maybe everything would have gone well. However, it often takes a long time to meet that person.
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第24話 穏やかに過ぎて行く時間への応援コメント
Oh, I'm really glad Lisa decided to discuss his condition and past relationships with Ikki. Maybe it will help him sort himself out. In fact, I'm very interested in learning more about his past relationships and understanding why he put up with all this. It probably happened because he entered into this relationship in his youth and was afraid of losing them, so he endured a lot, thinking that this was how he showed love. As you grow up and compare, you'll realize that you've endured in vain. This behavior is something that needs to be either corrected or terminated. They will not bring happiness.
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This is a setting that makes use of a lesson I learned from the second girlfriend I had in my life. The woman had the trait known in Japan as a "menhera." She sent me an email saying she was going to commit suicide immediately, and when I hurried over to her house, she was just like normal.
Whenever something happened, she would start crying in public, and passersby would think I was a terrible boyfriend who made her cry. But I loved her at the time, so I put up with it. If you don't have much experience in love, you can't see through a woman like that. In the end, I got sick and couldn't go to school for several months. But I don't hate her.
I designed the character Sachi, who is my ex-girlfriend in the story, while remembering how I felt at the time. However, I should say that my ex-girlfriend wasn't as terrible as this character. I've exaggerated a bit.
第23話 変わらない日々もあるへの応援コメント
Eat a delicious breakfast and look at the big beautiful mochi-mochi. What could be better? Ahaha, but you got caught, Ikki-kun, lol. Your sister knows where you're looking.
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It's a double treat. And he's a man after all. He can't resist the big Melon. And she has plenty of romantic experience, so there's no way she wouldn't notice.
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第22話 抗えない誘いへの応援コメント
It seems that this relationship brings both pleasure and pain. In the thoughts of the same Ikki, I see more anxiety, but almost no happiness. Lisa seems to be the same, but she's clearly starting to want to transform this relationship into a real one. We need to help Ikki clarify his feelings somehow. In fact, I think he loves her very much. If he didn't love her, he wouldn't go on dates and wouldn't really care about any little things together.
About the delicious food. I agree, borscht is a wonderful soup, especially if you eat it with sour cream. Of the soups, I would also strongly recommend trying the "Meat solyanka po-kupecheski." It's very tasty. As for what to treat yourself to, I would suggest "Shangi with potatoes and sour cream." As a child, I was lucky enough to try the "shangi" that my grandmother made in the oven when I visited her in the village. It was incredibly delicious. Ahaha, I think grandmothers cook everything just fine.
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He has no confidence right now because things didn't work out with the first girlfriend he had in his life. It would be nice if he could blame the other person, but unfortunately he's the type to blame himself. That curse still grips him tightly. The same goes for Lisa; she's hurt by the failure of her marriage, but she can't find the courage to entrust everything to Ikki.
Thank you for the detailed information about the food. I looked into it and found that there are two Russian restaurants in Kyoto. The prices aren't strangely high, so I'll try to go when the time is right. As long as you don't delete this work, I can always see and confirm your opinion. Thank you.
第21話 映画の後にへの応援コメント
I am always fascinated by the description of different dishes and how they are deliciously eaten. And the main thing is rice. Even though I'm not Japanese, I love rice. I could eat it every day. And I also love ramen-style noodles. Ahaha. I got distracted. I hope these dates actually bring our main characters closer.
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Nowadays, you can eat rice anywhere in developed countries. Japanese companies have also expanded overseas with ramen. However, depending on the country, some people feel the rice or ramen tastes completely different from what they had in Japan. Differences in water quality or temperature might be factors. Speaking of cuisine, I think Russian borscht is a great invention. It's a wonderful dish. I found it to be a very sensible dish—warm and nutritious.
第20話 受け入れてしまえば案外平気への応援コメント
Ahaha. Proximity, without the possibility of going further, whets the appetite. Moreover, Ikki already knows that this is a very tasty meal.. Bear with it, Ikki, bear with it.
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It's precisely because of this kind of relationship that we can have enjoyable times together. Even if it started as a physical relationship, as long as it ends happily, that's what matters. Still, these moments of worry and doubt are also important in life.
第21話 映画の後にへの応援コメント
部長と恋愛なんてありえないがフラグになりそうな
誤解されやすくていい恋愛経験してないキャリアウーマンが慕ってくる若い部下にどハマりするとかありそうで
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部長関連については、実際にどうなるかをその目で確かめて頂ければ。
個人的には結構気に入っているキャラなので。
第19話 彼の優しさへの応援コメント
I like that Lisa is honest with herself. Her feelings change and grow. Don't give up. Take it for yourself, lol. I think he'll be only too happy about it. Ehehe.
About stories where people from different castes or social strata meet. In fact, there are quite interesting and pleasant stories there. But personally, in my opinion, stories look good, either where the main character is actively growing and developing over the course of the story, or where he is initially good at various things and just doesn't like to stand out, or for example is not very good at communicating and building social connections. But stories where the main character is completely zero, but suddenly gets close to a pretty cool heroine don't look very good, because they are not very plausible (these are often completely frivolous comedies). I don't like main characters who look like a rag.
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Lisa continues to be captivated by his charm. Her state of mind is an important element of the story.
Maybe my interpretation was a little strange because I changed translation tools. I agree with most of what you said. I also like stories where the main character grows. At the same time, I don't understand stories where the main character is liked for strange reasons.
第18話 憧れのお姉さんはやっぱり可愛いへの応援コメント
Oh. To suggest to the guy with whom you are a sexual partner to date your daughter in the future.. It's a little weird. In addition, there may be many other factors why this will not happen. But I understand that it probably just shows how the difference of almost 10 years is perceived. I think it's very individual. These thoughts again. He's young, so he deserves to find someone younger and better than me. Pfft.. and if you are the best for him, even with this age difference? You don't have to decide for another person what's best for them. Stereotypes. It's like stories about school castes. A simple guy can't date the queen of the class, they're unbalanced, yeah. Nonsense.
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Yes, the age gap is definitely the main focus. At the same time, it's important for the daughter to marry a sincere person. Is this caste-like idea—that an ordinary guy can't marry the class beauty—pretty much universal everywhere? It's certainly a frequent theme in American movies and Japanese anime. Especially in Japanese works aimed at men, there's a tendency toward such depictions. I can understand it to some extent, but it's not exactly a favorable perspective. This time, I'm writing more in line with social norms than romantic ideals, so it might give a quite different impression from my previous works. My last line of defense is simply not making the protagonist a weak man.
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第18話 憧れのお姉さんはやっぱり可愛いへの応援コメント
娘的には主人公のことどう思ってるんだろうなあ
好きだとしたら初恋の相手が母親のセフレしてますとかきつすぎる
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娘さんの初恋は同級生の男の子なんで大丈夫です。
一輝君の事はお兄ちゃん的な存在として見ています。
あんまり恋愛対象としては見ていないですね。頼りにはしていますが。
第17話 楽しい時間への応援コメント
Hmm.. Ikki's thoughts are going in the right direction. I wonder what will push him to stop thinking about the possibility of Lisa leaving for someone else, and start thinking about the fact that he wants to marry her himself? The thought of the reasons is hovering somewhere nearby, but it keeps eluding me.. Did past relationships make you so insecure?
Nakajima-san, I have a question. And how common is it really that guys try to pick up girls in crowded places, and quite persistently? Does this really exist? I'm not arguing, you can try to get to know each other, but insist.. it seems that nowadays you can seriously pay for this.
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This is purely my personal opinion, but from what I've seen, Japanese men tend to lack initiative in romantic relationships. Male-targeted works often feature protagonists like this. Depictions of men actively expressing affection are common patterns in female-targeted works (personally, I prefer that approach). Making the protagonist clumsy in love was partly for that reason. I also believe dating just one woman isn't enough experience.
Approaching women in crowded places—what's commonly called “picking up women,” right? While it's decreased significantly lately, there are still people who openly call themselves “pickup artists” and engage in this kind of nuisance behavior without hesitation. They approach women anywhere and brag on social media about “how many people they've slept with.” Of course, it's a nuisance, and in serious cases, the police might be called. However, it rarely leads to lawsuits.
第17話 楽しい時間への応援コメント
頼りになるし気もきくし絶倫だし主人公に足りないのは経験だけか
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その経験部分が大きいと思うのですよね。
実際問題、1人彼女が出来ただけ、1人とセックスしただけでは経験不足も良い所ですし。
第16話 いつもと違う空気感への応援コメント
Ahaha. Ikki, no one sleeps with younger brothers.. probably. In general, it is clear that at this stage she perceives you as a man. The problem is that at the current stage it won't escalate into something more serious. But let's fantasize. You will date a lot, make love, but then either someone will be interested in you (for example, the boss), or someone will be interested in Lisa (or maybe both of you will have such a person) and then the question will arise - do you want to end this relationship and go to another person? Or, given how you came to this relationship, maybe you'll just realize sooner that you don't want to end it. There are so many possible paths.. In my opinion, the biggest advantage between Lisa and Ikki is that they know each other well and have great chemistry. I would say that this is an 80% success rate.
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Having given up on his first love in the past, and due to their long sibling-like relationship, Kazuki struggles to gauge the right distance. In a way, she could be described as an idol-like figure. Even though she was someone he supported and watched over, for a long time he never thought of her as someone he could be with. Furthermore, an incident with his ex-girlfriend has made him unable to find the courage to take that step forward. His first girlfriend ended things terribly, so he also carries that fear.
第15話 戸惑う一輝への応援コメント
Ehehe. Well, how to refuse the caress of a tanned beauty. Moreover, Ikki is certainly right. Girls in their 30s are often better than young beauties in some aspects. And in my opinion, 30 years is still a young age. About the advice. I think it's less common in our country. People don't want to discuss personal things with someone and prefer to keep their thoughts and emotions to themselves, leaving the decision to themselves. I think we can consult, but definitely not on the issues that Ikki is facing. This is too important a question and the opponent is too important a person for Ikki.
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Is this also a uniquely Japanese way of thinking? Once women pass 30, people tend to assume their prime is over. There's even a theory that Japanese men have a tendency toward lolicon. Personally, I've always preferred older partners.
I see, the dynamics of romance really do differ by country. In Japan, dating advice is popular regardless of gender. It's become staple content for streamers like VTubers. So it might be hard to relate to the protagonist's feelings. It could even seem like she's overthinking things.
第15話 戸惑う一輝への応援コメント
長い事女として扱われてなかった上に裏切られて捨てられたところに毎日女として求められる上にお姫様扱いで自己肯定感上げてくれる上にセフレでいいって言ってたのにデートとかも誘ってくる若い男とかどハマりするよなあ
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私がラブコメを書く時は、毎回少しだけ女性向けからの要素を入れるのですよね。
今回で言うと、旦那に裏切られた女性が主人公の年下スパダリ系から一つまみです。
なので、こういうデザインになっています。そこが伝わって良かったです。
第14話 これまでと違う関係への応援コメント
I think I can understand why Ikki is confused. He always took Lisa - nia very seriously. She was a model of a woman for him. And now he's in a strange relationship with her. I think it's important to think about what you want yourself. If a half-hearted relationship makes you uncomfortable, then you should probably strive for a full-fledged one, or break up. Nobody said you couldn't change anything. And it's not worth asking friends and acquaintances for such advice. No matter what they tell you, it's nothing. It's up to you to live with this decision, not your friends.
I remember Nakajima-san mentioned his dear girlfriend when we talked last time. I respect you very much for this decision. In my opinion, it's very cool and reliable. I wish you and your soulmate happiness.
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I usually write protagonists who make snap decisions, but it seems that doesn't resonate much with readers. So this time, I made the protagonist the type who agonizes and can't decide right away. In Japan, relationships where people can't decide immediately seem quite common—it's a society where men and women in their 30s and 40s email streamers for advice. I can't help but think, “Why don't they just decide for themselves?” How is it in your country? Do you have similar situations?
I see you remembered my story about my lover. It's truly an honor to have someone from another country think of it that way. Thank you.
第14話 これまでと違う関係への応援コメント
部長普通にいい人だけど嫉みで色々いわれてるのか怖がってる先輩がちゃんとしてなかったのかはたまた年下好きで主人公を狙っているエッチなお姉さんなのか
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その辺りは全て2章で出します！
第13話 変わった認識への応援コメント
Well, well, that's how we lick each other's wounds. Perhaps this is a rather pleasant way. But it seems to me that Lisa is somewhat mistaken. I'm pretty sure she won't be able or willing to let him go later. After all, you have now decided to fill your heart and body with intimacy with him. Why do you think you can give it up later? If you're so sure that someone else would be better for him, let's just make the boss from work an officially authorized lover, lol. I'm kidding.. It seems that, as Nakajima-san promised, this relationship will not develop as easily as we would like. Never mind, let's heal each other's hearts.
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This story was inspired by something my lover told me. Some time after we started dating, she revealed she had diabetes. She said it would be difficult for us to have children and asked me to choose another woman. I told him it didn't matter to me, but if I were a man who wanted children, I probably would have had to break up with her. Since I wasn't, our relationship continues. It really makes you realize that adult love requires a lot of thought.
第13話 変わった認識への応援コメント
主人公もまだ初恋の相手に恋愛感情向けてるか判断できてない感じかなぁ
元カノに振られてすぐだから純粋に好きなのか逃避先にしてるかも判断つかないのもあるか
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まだお互いに感情を整理出来ていません。理沙は恋愛経験が豊富ですが、一輝は彩智しか交際経験がないので特に。まだまだここから始まっていく関係ですから。
第12話 憧れのお姉さんとワンナイトへの応援コメント
Ehehe. Honest Ikki was rewarded by his beloved lady. Now it remains for us to gradually turn this into a lover's relationship, not just sexual partners.
It was actually kind of easy. I expected more resistance. Alcohol must have helped.
It seems to me that now Ikki should become more relaxed and raise his self-esteem a little. And Lisa, too. She was clearly shown that the guy next to her sees her as a beautiful woman very well.
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This is where the real story begins. With Ikki in his first year as a working adult and lacking funds, and the major obstacle of divorce history standing between them, they hesitate to take that step forward precisely because they care for each other. It's precisely because they value each other that they agonize. Unlike the previous story, this one depicts the complexities adults inevitably face.
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第11話 同期との昼食への応援コメント
Lisa seems to be unknowingly grabbing Ikki's stomach. Oh, I'm sorry, she probably did it a long time ago, lol.
About the dialects. I can imagine what it is, but of course, unfortunately, I cannot fully understand the difference, since I am not a resident of Japan. But I've always seen this moment in stories as something sweet that makes the hero or heroine a little special. Although, as I understand it, some people tend to make fun of people with a dialect unusual for the region. We also have many regions in Russia with different nationalities, which have some peculiarities of language and accent (almost the same as dialects). So in my opinion, this is a completely normal story. Actually, in my opinion, the leopard print looks much funnier, lol. Sorry, but I don't think it's very sexy, lol.
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For twelve years, Lisa had him wrapped around her finger. She was his mother, his sister, and the woman he admired.
Dialects cannot be fully reproduced even by current AI or translation tools. To be clear, this refers to the Kansai dialect spoken in places like Kyoto and Osaka. Its intonation, word meanings, and sentence-ending expressions differ significantly from standard Japanese. While it's difficult to compare since I don't understand Russian dialects, if I were to use an English analogy, it might be closest to a Southern accent.
第10話 新しい日々への応援コメント
For some reason, it seems to me that Lisa's ex-husband is dating Ikki's ex-girlfriend. The first time I thought that was when I read the episode where Lisa says she's divorced. For some reason, it seems to me that this is possible.
As for Lisa and Ikki's relationship.. It's very interesting what exactly will change their status QUO and how they will become a couple, but I'm pretty sure that the initiative will come from Lisa. She is more confident in herself and in what she would like to do. I think she will be the first to decide that she doesn't care about the age difference and the nature of the relationship in the past. I look forward to.
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The story about Lisa's ex-husband will be covered in Chapter 3, so please wait a little longer.
I want to avoid spoilers that ruin the reading experience, but Lisa has her vulnerabilities too. And as mentioned earlier, this is also connected to the perception Japanese society holds toward women with a divorce history, so the story in this work takes a somewhat circuitous path. They move forward in their own way, little by little.
第9話 職場の上司への応援コメント
It seems our main character is fascinated by beautiful older ladies. Ehehe. Of course, he sees his boss as the eldest in the first place, but he also saw a beautiful woman in her. I think it's entirely Lisa's influence.
Nakajima-san, I wanted to ask. I don't really understand this moment when company employees go to clients. Why are they doing this? For example, a hotel. Did the company already have a contract and they went just to introduce a new employee? Or did they make an appointment on the phone and went to sell something of their products? It seems to me that nowadays people rarely meet to make sales and most of the actions are done online - it's more convenient for everyone.
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This time, we've decided to feature two types of attractive older women. The double heroines are the cheerful Lisa and the cool boss. Takamine Shizuku's story begins in Chapter 2.
The protagonist's visits to various places were primarily for new employee greetings. The secondary purpose was to teach how to handle situations like misdeliveries. It also included the meaning of exchanging business cards, an old tradition. Japan hasn't fully embraced online systems yet, and not many companies handle everything online. Even major department stores still visit clients for meetings. Online solutions are common only in big cities; many rural areas still lack the infrastructure for online operations.
第8話 リサ姉の家でへの応援コメント
Furniture assembly is satisfying. It's like a construction kit for adults. But I would start with the bed. The clothes can wait, but I want to sleep comfortably. And I like the distance between them. Despite some separation and other factors, they are as close as if they had never been separated.
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Assembling furniture is kind of like playing around, isn't it? Especially the bigger the piece, the more so. Finding something with an innovative assembly method really gets me excited.
Oh, and I forgot to ask one thing. Lisa is a character who speaks the Kansai dialect. Is that okay for translation? I'd hate for it to cause any mistranslations.
Also, in Japan, there's a tendency to find women who speak in dialects cute, but in some countries, it can be seen as something to mock. I wonder how that plays out.
第7話 もしかしてこれ、デートなのか？への応援コメント
Ehehe. Even at the age of 22, you will be aroused if a tanned beauty hugs you and unobtrusively attacks you with her huge soft weapon. It's really great that they met. Lisa, of course, is a playful girl, but I think deep down it's not easy and lonely for her right now. Not only did she get divorced, but the baby was also taken away. I think it's very hard for a mother. She really needs someone close to her right now.
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Lisa was once a troubled student who went through a rough patch. The happiness she found beyond that didn't last forever. But things are different now. She should have ended up alone, but she didn't have to be. Still, she carries pain and sorrow she doesn't show outwardly, and he will heal those wounds for her. As they heal each other's scars.
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第6話 あの日何を言ったのかへの応援コメント
It seems that all the girls who asked him to pretend to be a guy, or to endure something difficult had some other motives. It's just that either he's a pretty insensitive type, or his ex-girlfriend drove away all the "insects". I am very glad that Ikki is ready to be at least partially honest with Lisa. For example, saying that she still looks young and beautiful. This gives a good chance that the relationship will be able to develop in the right direction. Although, I remember that we also talked about the boss at work. Maybe we paid a little special attention to her for a reason and learned about her character and personality?)
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Since it's only Episode 6, we're still in the phase of revealing things gradually. The questions you're feeling now will become clearer as the story progresses. That's why I confirmed terms like “trial behavior” and “date DV.” I thought if they weren't concepts recognized overseas, people might not understand their meaning. Judging by the reactions I've seen so far, I think it should be fine.
第5話 初恋のお姉さんとお出掛けへの応援コメント
Hmm. It seems so far that it's even hard for our hero to imagine that he could date Lisa. His self-esteem has clearly suffered. I also think it's influenced by the fact that he only had one partner (there really isn't much experience). It's like something out of a story about teenagers who love each other but can't admit it, lol. But unlike indecisive teenagers, we have a hot woman here who can just eat her beloved boy. Nakazima-sensei, about different dating tactics. To be honest, I haven't been on a date for a long time (I don't need to anymore, ahaha) so I can't say for sure. But remembering my early youth experience, I can say that I have never encountered such phenomena as "test behavior" and "intentional aggression." I suppose there are probably such people. I'm already curious to find out from our story what it was)
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This time, precisely because they're adults, the story explores the difficulty of being together based on feelings alone, so they face various struggles. As mentioned earlier, this is due to her being a divorced woman and him being a man without solid assets yet.
Regarding “trial relationships” and “dating violence,” these themes will be gradually revealed within the story going forward.
第2話 初恋のお姉さんとお酒への応援コメント
旦那有責で母親側が親権とれないって相当だな
娘の方はどう思ってるんだろ
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その辺りは最終章の3章で触る所なので、あんまり詳細は明かしませんが娘の話はそこで解決させます。
最近の事件等を見ていると、これぐらいの問題はどこかで起きているのでは？ と思った事を理由にしています。
第4話 食事のお誘いへの応援コメント
Huh. It seems the ex-girlfriend was not the most pleasant person. I'm willing to bet that because of her own behavior, the relationship began to seem boring and insipid to her. So, perhaps our main character is right. It's good that this oppressive relationship is over. And how easily the first love began to fill his heart and thoughts. Ehehe. I think it doesn't matter how many years pass. First love will bring exciting emotions to your heart all your life. After all, this is the one who conquered you for the very first time in your life.
Hello dear Nakazima-sensei! I am very glad to see your new job and to talk to you again. About the subject of this story. Of course, I have already met stories about girls "Gyara" in various forms of this term (from just clothes to a full-fledged bully). It seems that the modern image of such a girl boils down more to a certain style of clothing than to character. Sorry I've been missing for a while. I was busy with work for a while, and then, purely by chance, I got carried away with stories about changing chastity and reincarnated heroes. In addition, for some time there were difficulties in using foreign websites. But in general, everything is fine. I really hope that you are doing well too. The international situation has remained tense lately, and there is little good news. At such moments, books are the only thing that saves, allowing you to escape into the cozy worlds of writers. Ehehe.
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My ex-girlfriend was young, so she made various poor choices. As the story progresses, the details will become clear. Do concepts like “test behavior” or “dating violence” exist in your country?
“Test behavior” refers to intentionally causing trouble or inconvenience to someone. “Dating violence” is literally domestic violence against a romantic partner.
My new work contains elements specific to Japan, so there might be parts you don't understand. If you don't get something, please feel free to ask again, just like before.
I'm relieved to hear you were familiar with the Japanese subculture known as “gal.” This heroine possesses a slightly unique attribute even among these women called gals. In Japan, she falls under the category of “kuro-gal,” referring to gals who intentionally tan their skin at facilities called “sunbed salons.” This has absolutely nothing to do with racial discrimination; it simply became popular based on the prevailing values of the time, where they believed “it looked cuter that way.” Further evolved forms include more extreme fashion styles like “ganguro gals” and “yamamba makeup.”
There were various reasons, I see. Regardless of the state of the world, I am truly delighted to be able to connect with people from other countries through my novels. I look forward to your continued support.
第3話 大人になっていたあの子への応援コメント
Ehehe. Is the path to being together going to be difficult?)
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First of all, thank you so much for writing a review! You've set a new record for the fastest review I've ever received since I started writing novels. Also, I'm so glad to hear you're doing well. I was worried something might have happened.
I saw news reports in Japan about Russia facing a difficult situation. I've heard various bad things, like gasoline prices being unbelievably high.
第2話 初恋のお姉さんとお酒への応援コメント
Are we going to lick each other's wounds? Well, sometimes love starts with that, too. I hope these two will succeed.
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This work features a young man in his first year of working life as the protagonist, rather than a teenager. It focuses on the difficulty of pursuing romance based solely on whether one likes someone, as was possible during student days, once adulthood arrives. In Japan, women in their thirties with a divorce history are often judged to have significantly diminished appeal. How does this compare overseas?
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第1話 元ヤンギャルママとの再会への応援コメント
The beginning is quite interesting and catchy. Especially the main character. I like the black older sister. I wish this story success!
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This time, the theme is the Japanese cultural phenomenon “Kurogyaru” that emerged around the year 2000. Are you familiar with it? While gal culture is recognized overseas, this is a slightly niche topic.
第1話 元ヤンギャルママとの再会への応援コメント
30歳の黒ギャルヤンママとは…しかも可愛くてエッチだとか…これはこれは…期待しかありませんw
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エッッッッ！デッッッ！な黒ギャルお姉さんネタです！
エロなら定番ですけど、あんまりラノベではメインヒロインにならないのは勿体ないなぁと思って考えた作品です。
ご期待に応えられる内容、かどうかは分かりませんが、お楽しみ下さい！
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第64話 恋人として過ごす最初の夜への応援コメント
Yea!!! Now lets go see Dad and get his approval to make Risa feel secure.