Call me Willem, I am a novelist in kokuyomu, yes my account tag is J77, and I am writing here, because you have started it for the first time,Thank you, even when I was still losing at writing, you were the one who never underestimated me, Actually the story is good, friend, but what's lacking is the psychology in the delivery (maybe), don't give up, this is not your limit, you can do better, I believe in you, don't throw away your pen, why have you been writing all this time, if you are doing it yourself.