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- ★★★ Excellent!!!
As you can see, I am using web MTL (machine translator Language), hope don't be a problem.
I like how you mixed various canon used in Japanese Light Novel and honestly get tired of them.
The concepts are really good, maybe missing some We probably use more in west, like Golf Cars, ATV's, yachts, jet skis and others, I think the main character evolution it's interesting, so far concentrated in the short term, I mean her life term and not beyond to the next generation and how they would do with probably less skills and capacity than her.
Overall: 👍 good job
Thanks